this was fine....

but you need a button tutorial. we shouldn't have to click on only the letters of the button. please define your hit areas with buttons.
thanks.

i generally hate the sprite genre...

but you did an excellent job with it. nice job of actually considering how you construct shots. sprites are really lame if they just run around doing stupid stuff with bad type showing up. thank you for taking soem serious consideration in making this. this is by far the best sprite piece i have seen here.

nice use of flash

nice use of flash to get a graphic novel style. the pacing is pretty nice. you could still work on some of the transitions and drawing style a bit and this could be some really good work.